this post was submitted on 27 Feb 2025
204 points (97.7% liked)
Art Shareπ¨
6942 readers
160 users here now
This is a friendly community for everyone who wants to share their art with the world! Everyone is welcomed π¨
Please visit https://lemmy.world/c/artmarket as well! This is a community for artists to post their portfolios and announce availability to take commissions, as well as get visibility for Ko-fi, Patreon, and other funding for art activities.
Rules
AI Art: While we appreciate AI generated art, there are more appropriate communities to post that type of art to. Please keep posts to non-AI generated art only. This rule includes AI art that was then manually manipulated (e.g. drawing on top of something generated by AI).
NSFW Policy: Nudity and suggestive content has always been a part of art, but it may be something that some users don't wish to see or cannot view in certain circumstances (e.g. at work). If your work contains nudity or suggestive content, please mark it as NSFW. Work that contains nudity or suggestive content that is not marked as NSFW will be taken down. As long as the NSFW tag is used, we welcome nude or suggestive subject matter. If you aren't sure if your work is NSFW or not, just ask yourself, "Could I look at this at a typical office job and not get into trouble?" If you're still not sure after that, you should probably mark it as NSFW just to be on the safe side.
Spam: Please do not spam this community. Self promotion is fine if you just want people to be aware of your work, but blatant attempts at spam will result in the past being removed and possibly a ban. If you aren't sure if what you are posting is spam, please contact the moderator first.
Conduct: Be nice, and don't be a jerk. Constructive criticism is OK, but don't be mean. Encouragement is always welcomed.
founded 2 years ago
MODERATORS
Your forms, lighting, colours, and values are all technically quite strong, but I see what you mean about not conveying as much emotional intensity.
It might be a limitation of the style itself? The way colour and light are used here make the eye want to appreciate the play of sunlight across foliage rather than connect with Sam's baleful gaze.
It'd be interesting to see if you could achieve the emotionality of the original with either increased realism or perhaps less, to emphasize the feelings on display. Or you might try a more surreal composition to give it some Edvard Munch energy. That'd be a fun angle.
I want to emphasize that you really have a great piece of work here, and it's hard to be very critical when the technical achievements of the work are so strong. Thanks for sharing.
Edit to add: or you could just try emphasizing the tension in the eyes and mouth, just pushing them a little bit past what is shown in the reference photo to make them more legible in this style.
Oh wow, all great ideas. I do feel like to push myself as an artist I will need to go beyond what is right in front of me. Thinking about it is intimidating and I'm not really sure where to start. But I will absolutely save your comments and reference them when I'm ready to give it a go!
In terms of digital painting, you've already far surpassed what I can do and I would love to see how much further you can take it. It can be intimidating to push yourself, but I for one would be delighted to see that happen.
Me too! It's nice having adult kids and discretionary time to get back into things I gave up when I started having kids.
Yep I'd go with the mouth tension, it's too relaxed
I recommend watching Clint Eastwood movie, there's one with a scene with a close up that feels like it's a whole minute of just his intense stare and some subtle mouth movements. Obviously he kills half the bar in 10 seconds after the scene.
Can't remember the name of the movie, it's where he's avenging Morgan Freeman (?) getting killed.
By the way, great job mutha fucka Ball Man