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DotN wasn't necessarily that it had not enough story, so much as several scenes went on for way too many pages, entirely deflating the tension. If we're 100 pages in and the protagonist is on his own in deadly danger- we don't need scenes that go on for 20 pages to describe action that doesn't move the plot until page 21 finally arrives.
Hashtag carriageChaseScene for anyone who's read it
Hmm, okay - that does sound frustrating.