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[–] dgerard@awful.systems 8 points 1 week ago (16 children)

I wrote a thing a decade or more ago I can't find now, about the early history of Vox's "explainers". They were literally wanting to replace Wikipedia as a go-to.

[–] sc_griffith@awful.systems 4 points 1 week ago (14 children)

i read a bit about that. i couldn't find quotes from the site employees saying they were trying to be wikipedia, so i didn't mention it because id have had to digress. but almost everyone who talked about the launch mentioned their weirdass card system for linking other articles, and that it was wikipedia like. and all the descriptions sounded AWFUL, like it would just be throwing useless rotating shit at you all the time

[–] dgerard@awful.systems 5 points 1 week ago (9 children)

there's this: https://nymag.com/news/features/ezra-klein-2014-2/

While Klein is being circumspect about the operational details of Project X, he suggests that breaking-news squibs could be very short and attached to constantly updated background articles, a bit like Wikipedia entries written by professional journalists. Long features might be regularly freshened up.

[–] sc_griffith@awful.systems 6 points 1 week ago (1 children)

especially amusing considering this, published only nine months after vox launched. not sure how much objective resource building the professional journalism would be buying you there, ezra

https://deadspin.com/46-times-vox-totally-fucked-up-a-story-1673835447/

[–] dgerard@awful.systems 10 points 1 week ago* (last edited 1 week ago) (1 children)

ah but if you assume a perfectly spherical polity of uniform density in a vacuum at absolute zero,, klein will still be wrong

[–] dgerard@awful.systems 13 points 1 week ago* (last edited 1 week ago) (2 children)

Ezra Klein so centrist, he could both-sides a Moebius strip

[–] rhamph@awful.systems 10 points 1 week ago (2 children)

That is, an Ezra Klein bottle

[–] istewart@awful.systems 4 points 1 week ago

isn't that what the youth use to make jenkem

[–] froztbyte@awful.systems 2 points 1 week ago (1 children)
[–] rhamph@awful.systems 4 points 1 week ago (1 children)

I registered just so I could make this very important joke. Hi!

[–] froztbyte@awful.systems 2 points 1 week ago

commitment to the bit

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