I've finished the original work, all fifteen chapters of it. Final verdict on the politics: This isn't a political piece. Any political themes are just set dressing for the plot. It's cosmic/psychological/body horror all wrapped into one, with a hint of lewdity. Honestly, I'm disappointed. However, how fucking evil the affini faction is is kinda inspiring to make my own sexy alien cosmic horror faction even worse than I've already wrote them. Overall, worth the couple hours I spent on it.
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So, I'm 6 chapters in, and I'm horrified, aroused, intrigued, and inspired to make one of the factions in my own writing infinitly worse.
Too early to make an opinion on if the work actually has a point to make or not.
I'm reading it now, I'll let you know after I'm deeper in.
perusing the wiki, and this looks suspiciously like something that I've been working on for the past couple months. I've been scooped! Again!
I think I'm going to have a great time reading it tho
wait, it's an actual book? I need to read this! what's the author and title?
I disagree.
and it was so good
no, you're just wrong.
What do you mean one of them? What kind of moron doesn't carry a knife as part of their regular kit? Just today, I forgot my knife and was boned because I couldn't open a thing until I got home. Knives are handy.
After a couple days of thinking about it, I think it's still slop, because no matter how detailed my prompt is, it's still just using the direct output of the ai. What I could do that I think would be ok though is use the ai version as a reference to do my own shading and whatnot.


It was worth the couple hours I spent on it.