Male Fashion Advice

Looks like you are about to ask me to come in to the office this weekend.

Just a couple of small details, and it may be partially the angle of the photo:

The tie bar looks like it is sitting low. They are typically placed between the third and fourth button on the shirt.

The suspenders look like they may be clipped too near your fly. They should draw a vertical line from your shoulder to your trousers. Some trial and error may be required to find the proper point as everyone is shaped a little differently.