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Man, this is great. It's good to think diversely when you write. Aim to reach all backgrounds, not only native English speakers. I promise you that I won't think less of you if you make your book easy to understand. To me, it's the story itself. The plot. How attractive it is and how immersed It's going to make me into it, not how badass your vocabulary are (is?). Not how complicated your novel is. I'm that guy who leaves a book when it is hard to understand and hard to make sense of (I have recently dropped a book by a great author, Ursula Guin, because it was insanely hard to follow). I'm not in it to test my IQ, I'm in it to entertain myself when I have a minute. We are all constrained on time, and the few hours we have daily, shouldn't be wasted on something that hardly makes any sense. That's at least how I look at it.
I should mention that I have a habit even outside of writing to overcomplicate things. I want to still write about my complex ideas, like the inner life and philosophy of an Eldritch god, but it definitely won't help if I overcomplicate the language I'm using.
Recently I finally accepted that not everything I write is pure gold and that I'm allowed to rewrite or delete stuff. After all, it's the idea being expressed in a paragraph that's important to me, not the words and their layout.
Philosophy is inherently complex, as it were. You speak philosophy and it's just a spaghetti. Novels don't need to be complicated in some cases.
Good luck on your writing. I won't mind a link to your books, btw. lol
Sure!
Just ebook: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1142382
https://books.google.ca/books?id=zQppEAAAQBAJ&newbks=1&newbks_redir=0&lpg=PP1&dq=tsel+shadow+of+death&pg=PP1#v=onepage&q=tsel+shadow+of+death&f=false
Ebook and paperback: https://www.amazon.ca/Tsel-Shadow-Death-Pouya-Sattari/dp/B09TMXDN3R